The few notes that I had were that I didn’t feel like Oona earned her ability to go home with Mikey the first night after the bar, which may have to do with the way that the new scene was cut with him in her office.
Hi Swimali…any suggestions for recutting that scene? Do you want Oona to be stronger in the office scene?
Here are my notes….
The Timer store seems too long, it just gets boring.
The sound is very uneven on seq. 3 - I’ll work on it!
At the end in the bed…I think Oona should have taken off her timer for Steph or even for herself, not Mikey. She’s already moved beyond him and beyond timers.
I’d like more wide shots….then it seems like a movie…
Hi Norm, I can’t find your notes on V299 but have printed your latest update with notes of the entire film…hoping your V299 are now included in this…and that I can make the changes you’ve asked for by the next cut. Tracy
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swimali // March 19, 2008 at 1:19 pm
The few notes that I had were that I didn’t feel like Oona earned her ability to go home with Mikey the first night after the bar, which may have to do with the way that the new scene was cut with him in her office.
tracywren // March 21, 2008 at 3:53 am
Hi Swimali…any suggestions for recutting that scene? Do you want Oona to be stronger in the office scene?
Here are my notes….
The Timer store seems too long, it just gets boring.
The sound is very uneven on seq. 3 - I’ll work on it!
At the end in the bed…I think Oona should have taken off her timer for Steph or even for herself, not Mikey. She’s already moved beyond him and beyond timers.
I’d like more wide shots….then it seems like a movie…
tracywren // March 23, 2008 at 10:45 pm
Hi Norm, I can’t find your notes on V299 but have printed your latest update with notes of the entire film…hoping your V299 are now included in this…and that I can make the changes you’ve asked for by the next cut. Tracy
Norman // March 23, 2008 at 10:57 pm
I’m just posting my notes now. I was waiting to see what you all came up with.
Print out the class notes that Coyote posted. I’ve got the first three sequences of mine up there as well.
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